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Please read this article (to the end of Hannah's story) then answer the question below. Write at least FIVE sentences (topic, thesis/opinion, evidence from article, evidence from article, conclusion).
This team of girls loses every game, usually by about 50 points! No body seems to think there is anything wrong with that. Why? Use evidence from the article to back up your opinion.
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So Morgan was from a very poor family and they didn't have money or food or anything so her parents shoplifted food and stole gas and one day her parents were beating each other and she decided to step in and stop them.Later she got sent to an academy she saw it as a blessing free from bulling and embarrassment she had also been steeling prescription med's from her parents saying it was under strict order from her friends but it turns out it was from her dad.After her parents arrest there was a couple who loved Morgan and they wanted to adopt her they got her a good home and a good family.
ReplyDeleteIs loosing every game really that bad does it really make them feel bullied or what not? My opinion is no they are just playing a game and they are not worried about loosing. Hannah said it herself she does not care if she looses the game because at least she is still having fun. All the girls want to do is just get away from there drama and there problems at home just being able to play is good enough for them. Nobody should ever worry if they loose a game. The reasoning behind this is that if you are playing the sport you love and you are having fun then just don't worry about the score.
ReplyDeleteAll these girls have lots of problems like some of them are pregnant or some of them already have babies that are at home or at the school with them. Lots of the kids have family problems which are the worst they have to suffer lots of things everyday. The reason there's nothing wrong with them losing 50 points or less is because they have never won a game or they just don't worry about it to much because they have so many other problems at home or were they are staying at. They all get sad at times but at least their playing and staying out of big trouble.
ReplyDeleteIn the article about the girl who her parents got into a big argument and were both sentenced to jail, Hannah was sent to a school specially for her. Hannah decided to join the schools basketball team with among other students who had faced the same problems. Hannah's basketball team has lost 213 games in a row, but that might be because the kids could be in shock for what had happened to their parents.
ReplyDeleteShould the girls basketball team care if they loose or win? they shouldn't because it's just a game and they just need to have fun. It's a good thing they play because they forget about anything and they can enjoy their game.
ReplyDeletethe girls at jaguar academy were losing all of their games by 50% in all their games do you see something wrong here? well the town where they live is full of bad things like teenagers drinking and having baddies at the age of 14-18 its like they don't care if they are losing because they are looking outside the world they are putting more importance to the outside world
ReplyDeleteThis is a story of a family that took the wrong decisions in life and there daughters and sons where the ones that had to pay for it and suffer. One might say that the reasons why the girls loose is because they really just don't care about life anymore and don't put forth effort. Another reason is because they don't see as a punishment but a sanctuary .
ReplyDeleteCarroll academy has lost a lot of games and many of the reasons are that girls are pregnant, some already have had their babies, they are doing drugs sometimes they are at the school with them. Kids around the world have family problems and suffer like them too. I think that the reason why they don't win a game is because they focus to much on other problems like the ones they have at home
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