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So there's 2 missing body's a Indian man and a Italian women's there was a huge wreck a lot of people were at the coast guard from civilians to news reporters the ship was as long as 3 football fields the coronial was stabilized with cement bags and the cost is 300 million and they say it could keep rising the ship right now has 2 enemy's weather and time they say if It moves 20 degrees it will start taking in water there's a remote chance the whole ship will break apart.
ReplyDeleteThis story is about a ship that has been almost flipped over. There was lots of passengers on board. Some people were not found they counted them missing. They don't know to much of what happened exactly. They've tried to make the ship roll on its side its suppose to be but they're scared if they do they wont know what will happen. At the end they take the captain and some crew member to a trial the members say they are guilty but the captain tries to say he's not guilty that he saved life's.
ReplyDeleteBasically what this article is saying is that in Giglio, Italy many people like biologist and many other are trying to get out a ship that sunk couple months ago. The vessel on which is part of the boat is stuck but the people are trying hard to get it out but from what i have read i think they have got it out from the place they were stuck in. In my opinion I think they should take it out of the water because it might be leaking fuel in the water in which soon will spread and possibly intoxicate the waters close by not just that but as time passes it will soon leak out the entire fuel which will intoxicate the water,killing fishes and such.
ReplyDeleteThere was a wreck at the costa concordia cruise liner. There was a loss of 30 lives i the accident.
ReplyDeletethe ship that wrecked was as long as three football fields. The coronial was established with cement bags.
This artical was about engineers embarked on a cost after a huge wreck and two bodies were missing, one boy and one girl.
ReplyDeleteI think they should just start to make smaller ships because if they wreck then allot of people get hurt. I think that the captain should have more watch outs. The problem is, is that the captains and crew need to watch out for more things. They captain now becomes reliable for the people who have died. Now the captain looks bad in others eyes. The company of the ship looses tons of money. They now have a chance of going bankrupt. In this case they should spend less on there huge vessels and find better quality crewman.
ReplyDeletethe ship was about 950 foot vessel they need it to take it out of the shore because it turn to it side and the in the guy that were taking the vessel of of the water they were having a lot of trouble because they didn't think that it was going to work and they were nervous because they haven't done something like this in the whole entire lives this was something new for then and they have a lot of question about the thing and it cost 200 to 3000 millions dollars
ReplyDeleteThis article is taking about how a ship flipped over and trying to flip it back. There are still looking for two bodies dead or alive. They have wasted over 799 million dollar already and more in the future.
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