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ReplyDeleteAfter a costly painstaking and potentially perilous operation to raise the battered hull of the cruise ship Costa Concordia, engineers said that they had succeeded in righting the ship, removing it from two granite reefs, killing 32 people. The 19-hour, and the cruise ship was completely rotate. Leaning it on an underwater platform built underneath. It rotated like some people guessed it would. Experts have said the dimensions of the stricken 951-foot vessel made the operation unparalleled in the annals of marine salvage, as more than 500 divers. The broadcast was live on the Internet.
ReplyDeleteThe ship was doing alright till they hit a side of the ice, once that happen it started to slide to the side. "The next phase of the salvage, engineers said, involved settling the wreck on an artificial seabed made of bags of cement next to underwater steel platforms. To achieve that, the cruise liner needed to be rotated about 65 degrees, they said. If it all goes well, the ship will be towed away and broken up for scrap by spring." It must of been scary with every second going by now knowing how things could turn out. It's amazing how the vessel emerged later that afternoon on Monday, discolored and rusting from the water.
ReplyDeleteThey are talking about the ship that tiped over not long ago and they were trying to get it back to normal. It was done and finished at 4am. Engeniers and every type of people that fix things were there to support this ship to put it back in place. It took 14 month to put it back to where it was and over seven hundred dollars for something.
ReplyDeleteWell a ship crashed or sank. It took a long time to get it out of the water. They had to put bags of cement on underwater metal platforms and put the ship on it. Not a lot of people got hurt. Most of the people were fine. they got the ship out of the water. and tried to find the problem.
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ReplyDeletein the story that we read it was about this huge cruise ship that tipped over near Italy. it stated that the captain was fighting manslaughter I think its bs.
ReplyDeleteThis article talks about how a ship flip over and the captain of the ship just left everyone before it was safe. Some of his crew said there were guilty and there being fine hundred millions of dollars. There still chemical fuels that can spread over the tour place. The captain was charged with manslaughter because his the one who caused this.
ReplyDeleteThe recovery of the Costa Concordia is underway. Recovery crews are working hard to retrieve the Csota Concordia. They have to rotate it a certain way. They also have to tow it out and cut it up for scrap. If things don't go well they have over 500 men crew from engineers to archaeologists to figure it out. If all goes well everything will be back to normal.
ReplyDeleteA ship sank and it took them a while to fix it and get it back to normal. Its a big ship but they got it to work again. Its crazy how something like that could happen knowing that its a big ship. Not lots of people got hurt but its still bad.
ReplyDeleteThe ship broke down and went under water. One day it just emerged out of the water on its side. Now people are trying to remove it from the granite reefs. Where it ran last year, and it killed 32 people. Now they are getting biologist and others to help people get the boat on the right side. After the 19 hourly operation they got the boat on the right side. So they are gonna out the boat so its up and running again.
ReplyDeleteIn this article on this Italin Cruise Ship that was left sunk for more than a year due to the Captains failure, took a lot of precision to bring her back to life. This project was planned for fourteen months prior to the date they would unsunk the ship. This project also cost about 300 million dollars to start and ended up costing more then 770 million dollars. At the end of it all it took them about 14 hours to bring this Italian vessel back to life and now they are charging the captain of the ship for manslaughter due to abandoning the ship and killing 32 people in the wreck.
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